Ants crawl in the clouded space...

Yeah weird title.  But it kinda sums up the point I'm about to make.

Listen to some of the pop songs out there.  A lot of them have a huge PUNCH in their first line.

ex.

Ke$ha-Tik Tok
"Wake up in the mornin' feelin' like P-Diddy..."


Katy Perry-Firework
Do you ever feel like a plastic bag....?    ( ok....so i thought that that was starting off well then the phrase ended like : "Do you ever feel like a plastic bag, drifting through the wind, wanting to start again?" What the hell does that mean?!?!)  


Regina Spektor- Samson
"You are my sweetest downfall..."

All American Rejects- Give You Hell
"I wake up every evening with a smile on my face..."


So for this week, I'll try to write a song with a first line punch...